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My love
Is like white light,
Intense,
Comprised of the entire color spectrum,
But for now it has been diffused into its original components
By the prism you have set forth.
The colors are brilliant but aimless,
Mere echoes between empty walls.
My love
Is like potential energy, waiting
To be converted to kinetic energy,
At top speed and with incredible momentum.
But first, you have to push.
Written April 23, 2013, after an exasperated venting session with a fellow tormented soul about being lonely because we have so much love but no idea what to do with it. Going with my thirteen-liner format again, because it just keeps happening that way.
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Love and Eighth Grade Science by *aloverscharm adds a loving quality to physics and a technical side to romance with a wonderful parting line. ( Featured by Nichrysalis )
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CassieCros13 Jun 17, 2013  Student Writer
:omg: I can't believe I didn't read this earlier! :heart: Congrats on the DD! Very beautiful. :clap:
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blackoutpoet Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, love! <3
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ivorysinkshore Jun 14, 2013  Student Writer
I love science in poetry so naturally I'd love this poem which I do. :) Congratulations on the well-deserved DD on this piece. :heart:
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blackoutpoet Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you!! :D
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ivorysinkshore Jun 14, 2013  Student Writer
You're very welcome! :la:
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deathbyskyrim Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Someday your potential energy will end up being converted to kinetic via a spontaneous reaction, if you know what I mean! You just have to find someone who provides the right kind of catalyst to lower the energy requirements for interaction. Even then, it may be slow-moving, but over time it releases massive amounts of energy, AND it's been shown that, in the right setting, the reaction will be self-sustaining. All you have to do is jump-start the reactants, and pretty soon the products themselves are what provide you with more fuel to keep the reaction going. It can be hard, and it will take LOTS of trial and error to find the right combination, but it's certainly doable. When you get that reaction to work, trust me.... it will completely redefine your outlook on science. ;P
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blackoutpoet Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Um, do you know how awesome that was? :O I'm floored!
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deathbyskyrim Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, really?! As I hit the comment button, I was thinking, "Oh my God, this is such bullshit", guess I DID learn something in uni after all.
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TheGalleryOfEve Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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blackoutpoet Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, Eve! :blowkiss:
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